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Submitted: February 7, 2011
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Make:Canon
Model:Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
Shutter Speed:1/250 second
Aperture:F/5.6
Focal Length:163 mm
ISO Speed:400
Date Taken:Jul 31, 2010, 9:37:43 PM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows
Sensor Size:4mm

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Critique by =hquer Feb 8, 2011, 1:28:52 PM

Although swings are an often pictured setting the artist managed to really create something special by framing the picture to be perfectly symmetric. The technique behind the picture is executed very well and helps to support the general feeling of the image by having just the swing in prefect focus.

A great aspect of this work is the vivid lighting combined with the dreary colors. My only critique is that the lighting is a bit too uniformly. Perhaps a border around the image or even a slight vignetting (darkening the border areas) could have helped to intensify the picture even more.

The composition also sets this picture apart from many other similar photographs. The gently curved form of the swing together with the symmetry of the chains and the centric position makes this work create a real artistic feeling.

An overall very good piece of art that would look great when printed and framed.

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~Dace54874 Apr 10, 2011 Hobbyist Photographer

great work, I really like the change in colour of the seat

~soPWNEDXcore Apr 13, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Thanks!

~Onihikage Feb 14, 2011

Great photo, very well done! Basically everything that critique says

~soPWNEDXcore Feb 14, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Thank youuuuuuuu! :3

~LaPetiteAda Feb 8, 2011

i love it because although it is very simple it is also very expressive. the focus, the colors and the quality of the photo are great. good work

~soPWNEDXcore Feb 9, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Thanks very much!

~nicambi Feb 7, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I wish I could critique this... :C
Cause I think its one of your best photos. <3 Along with every other masterpiece in your gallery, but thats beside the point. C;

~soPWNEDXcore Feb 8, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Thanks so much, love. <3
I really appreciate that you like my photogrphy, it took forever to get it just right, and I still haven't learned most of the tricks in the book. But of course, that's part of what DA is for, to learn.

~nicambi Feb 8, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

True dat, true dat. C: I know I've learned so much from my watchers and the people I watch. They've definitely helped me improve my drawing skillz. XD

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